When I See You I Can't Breathe

by Unloved ♥   Feb 26, 2005


Your eyes make me loose control
And your touch never lets go
Your smile lights up a room
In my heart forever you'll be consumed

All these things you make me feel
And only you can
Your like a witch you has put a spell on me

When I see you I can't breathe
I suffocate from the sight of you
You make me trip and fall
Because when I see you, you control me all

**this isn't finished, but please go ahead and comment,vote..thanks!!**


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  • 19 years ago

    by Andrea

    i love it so far! i cant wait to read when you continue...

  • 19 years ago

    by Unloved ♥

    haha no not really I just like to pretend, but thanks

  • 19 years ago

    by Scaleeski

    I LOVE IT...Wow better then all my poems..Seriously..It was great..It's good to know someone is in your life..and don't be shy either..I am sure he is in your league..Haha

    Chris
    5/5 unfinished or not..