by ntv650 Feb 26, 2005
category :
Special events /
other poems
The anger became gently smothered by the melody in the air, |
by Jenn
I liked your poem! It's interesting!! |
by Leah20
I liked this poem. It flowed nicely. The only critism that I have to offer you is to not have the last two lines rhyme, because blank poetry is good when it has no rhyme, but when you but in rhyme, it detracts from the flow. Good job, keep writing! |