Suicide..

by Armed-Alcoholic   Feb 26, 2005


So many people's lives gone,
All because of you, suicide.
You whisper words of hatred,
So, in the knife they confide.

Tell them they are worthless,
When it is not true at all.
You laugh at them in their face
When finally, they take the fall.

You've taken the lives of many,
So many were friends of mine.
You pick on the weak people,
The ones that are not fine.

You take the broken people,
The ones hurt from the start,
You never pick on strong ones,
Ones that aren't broken apart.

Suicide, you're just another bully,
Bulling us weaker then you.
You bully the broken and shattered,
Cuz that's all that you can do.

You weaker then us suicide,
If we stood up to you you'd run.
Stop hurting us now suicide,
Stop having your cruel fun.

Suicide, go away, you can't bother me.
I can be strong, I'll show you,
You can't hurt me anymore.
With hurting me you're through.

*Dunno where I was going with this.. sorry it sucks*

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  • 19 years ago

    by fastforward

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  • 19 years ago

    by Just Sierra

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    ~Sierra

  • 19 years ago

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