thats so good now i really can't wait to hear the ending lol
xxxChristinaxxx

This is realy good so far, cant wait till you finish it

wonderfull

Really Well written...thank you for commenting on my poem, means the world to me.....can't wait to read the end.....

Kalika

this is really good!! ~~> waiting for the ending!! :) keep it up! :)

this is really good, want to read the finished one!

Good story plot for your poem. I think this one is your best so far.

aww this is good too..quite sad...keep it up i ll keep chekin! tcz~

who shot who? I can relate to this poem in a weird way... (my parents are not abusive) you are talented i like how you show the inocence the little girl posses....

Xox Sherrie

you have talent.another great poem.

Exellent I love ur talent! It's a such a sad poem but u have such good imagination!

Beautiful horror xx

WOW! This is a great poem...so far! I hope you finish it soon....
Love alwayz.....
Haily
XOXOXOXOXOXO

ver sad indeed

Another powerful one - I could picture Daddy's little girl with a vivid imagery - testiment to your words - well done xx

Oh so sad....... Great poem though even though it brought tears to my eyes. :)

This is so peowerful ans sad at the same time,,,,,It grabbed me from the beginning to the end, I love it although it made me cry!!!1 WOW.....

Sad and touching. I must say that it seemed more like a story than a poem though, because of the flow. Anyway, very sad. Keep writing,
Satuxxa

You have a very solid base here, work with it, I would very much like to hear the rest...finely expressed.

I would like to hear it when it finishes because so far its erally good. sad though but good job. :)