Last NIght

by Bredada   Feb 26, 2005


Tell me y
our relationship was goin well
then u started actin funny
didnt even give it a TRY
so for this i might take my life
i wish for one thing
if i end up seein dat light
n i die tonight
promise that you will hold me tight
Only for this last one night

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  • 19 years ago

    by Leah20

    You can improve your poetry by capitilization and by not using "net speak" and proper grammar. Keep writing!

  • 19 years ago

    by *Sherrie*

    this is really good... i like your style...Sherrie