I loved this. I absolutly admire how you came up with the main concept of the dream and the incredible symbols you wrote with such darkness and tragedy tied into beauty to create an amazing impact on the reader. I loved the altering point, and how you were able to set up this horrific atmosphere then transfer it to a hopeful conetent and have the past images reveal "love lost" that was brilliant.
I especially admire the lines,
"Tossed about like tiny orbs of light, flickering among trees,
Entering into a clearing eerily lite by ladies dressed in white,
Pointing to the center, an abyss beckons me closer to see,
Covered in moss, smelling of dead roses, surely death for me,"
This piece was incredibly impactful, absolutly beautiful, excellent job

Wow, this poem is really great. You are very talented. This poem...its..so..*ponders* what's the word....Let's just say amazing. It's much more than that but i can't find the right word. Absolutely amazing. Keep up the great work. Maybe you could check out my new poem "unbarring Hatred" Well once again great poem!

xoxo
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