ShAmE To LeAvE Him Da CrOwn

by Bredada   Feb 26, 2005


U broke up with me
n begged to get me back
do me wrong once shame on you
do me wrong twice shame on me
but still i took you back
knowing u wer a mistake
u got me back
even doe love is what you lack
u love playin games
now is me dats left in pain
No not again
i should have known
not to leave him da crown
cuz now im left with this permanent frown
not to even be turned by some clown

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  • 19 years ago

    by Cory Mastrandrea

    Good message and everything. From what I read on your other poems it sounds like you are going for a certain type of sound in your writing. I don't think that is bad, but I think you should try some other stuff too. Just so that you can experiment. Other than that I liked the line about the crown.

  • 19 years ago

    by natalie

    i like this poem, especially for its honesty xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by xxangelchicxx2000

    this poem is really good. wonderful poem. i luv it.

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