this poem is really good. wonderful poem. i luv it. |
by natalie
i like this poem, especially for its honesty xxx |
Good message and everything. From what I read on your other poems it sounds like you are going for a certain type of sound in your writing. I don't think that is bad, but I think you should try some other stuff too. Just so that you can experiment. Other than that I liked the line about the crown. |