I know that some people gave me suggestions on different ways to write my eroticas, but I had to post this one before I tried them. This one may be a little raunchy for some people, but I hope you like it. Anyway let me know what you think. Thank you :)

Heyy veryyy good poem! its really good!

xX-Katherine-Xx

This was HOTT i loved it!!! 5/5 al de way! hope u write more for us 2 read. Great work.. Peace and love Mia

i loved it

this final chapter was the best. u really saved the best for last.

wow.. i liked it !5!

I liked all of them u write them so detailed

I think i've read all your poems now lol i hardly ever coment tho sorry -.- my bad i'll go back and coment lol very pretty and creative as always ^.^

Most amazing poem!! Thanks so much for writing. Damb that was hot... btw I love reading your poems.