hey great poem! thanks for commenting on mine :o)

..xOJessie

I dont believe you dont write good poems. " ask you not to let me fall
But I beg you to let me soar!!" what gr8 lines if only i cud write like that

Sometimes I think we all feel this way. I know I have a time or two over the man I loved... Very powerful when the writer can make the reader feel their pain or anger... even joy. It is a true accomplishment to make the reader feel your emotions. Good Job!

--Sher