I'll get through this~!!~

nice poem...and hochies...are really annoying....5/5

Your poem sounds so familiar I know a girl like that. I was friends with her for 2 years, and she tried to sleep with my fiance', and everyone elses boyfriend including the whole town. She was the same way wanted every man that was already taken. Luckly my fiance knew better, and stayed away. A year later she found out she had HIV. I don't know if you can call it bad Karma but I do. I'm not saying that she desearves to have that deadly disease but that's what happens when your not careful. Also don't let any man make you feel like you should hurt yourself or anyone else. There are so many guys out there you will find one that desearves you. Stay strong. Great poem I gave you 5***!
Thank you for rating, and leaving comments on my poems it really does mean alot to me. Lots of love,
Krystle

This is also a really good poem. The only comment that I would make is that you left out an 'o' on the following line. "I went t a doctor" This is an amazing poem. 5/5. Keep writing. Good job! Love Enna xxx

~ excellent write
~ take care, 5! always believe in love ~amit

Good job...I can definately relate to this poem. awesome, 5/5