Wow, thats really powerful, I didnt get the last line but that doesnt matter I dont get my own poems most of the time, keep it up love katie xx

crazy girl! but you tell him!!! lol 5/5
*~*Soldier Lover*~*

Thankx I have figured it out. I love ur poems I like this one because I had something like that happend to be as well. Keep up ur good work!

i liked that one alot haha i diddnt get the last line tho but thats ok becouse everything else was realy great.
Loved it greatjob.

great poem!! loved it!! i know how it feels for a "friend" to take yo man..you dont need em anyways!! keep it up!! great poem!! :)

Hey this was another awesome poem!! great job i really like it! i gave it a 5!!

xX-Katherine-Xx

Nice job. The only critism that I can offer is to try to establish a rhyme scheme, because then it will flow more nicely.

Hey this is really good i kinda no how u feel coz a gurl once stole a guy away 4rm me dat i relli loved! tis vv gd poem tho well done
ps if you cld plz look at my poem 'run away' it wld mean alot fanks xxxxx

I like your poem a lot and Im srry that happened to you...

i already commented on run away. i really like it. i cant even hold a candle to you.

Very Nice... very well-written =)
Liked it a lot.. 5/5

Hugs

thanks but i am sure you are better then me.

another great poem, i know how u feel 2 cuz ive been through the same thing, your an amzing writer keep up the great work!!

Good job, just one suggestion: Try to have more consistent rhthym in rhyming lines.

HEy, great poem, I know just how you feel. Keep writing.

Read my poems sometime!

-michelle

Good job...I can definately relate to this poem. awesome, 5/5

~ excellent write
~ take care, 5! always believe in love ~amit

This is also a really good poem. The only comment that I would make is that you left out an 'o' on the following line. "I went t a doctor" This is an amazing poem. 5/5. Keep writing. Good job! Love Enna xxx

Your poem sounds so familiar I know a girl like that. I was friends with her for 2 years, and she tried to sleep with my fiance', and everyone elses boyfriend including the whole town. She was the same way wanted every man that was already taken. Luckly my fiance knew better, and stayed away. A year later she found out she had HIV. I don't know if you can call it bad Karma but I do. I'm not saying that she desearves to have that deadly disease but that's what happens when your not careful. Also don't let any man make you feel like you should hurt yourself or anyone else. There are so many guys out there you will find one that desearves you. Stay strong. Great poem I gave you 5***!
Thank you for rating, and leaving comments on my poems it really does mean alot to me. Lots of love,
Krystle

nice poem...and hochies...are really annoying....5/5