Down

by valenza   Feb 26, 2005


Her brother gone
her cousin far
life she doesnt understand

her wrist is cut
her heart scarred
she needs a helping hand

her friends dont know
her parents blind
she doesnt have much hope

her eyes are cold
her dreams empty
she could use a drug to cope

her grades low
her depression high
fun she cant recall

her sun burnt out
her stars dimmed down
she thinks her sky will fall

Copyright ©2005 Vanessa

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~* Vanessa

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  • 19 years ago

    by Broken And Bleeding

    Dont kill yoursef!!! your awsome writer. keep writing. This is awsome. BUt dont ever try to kill yourself. Its not worth it.

  • 19 years ago

    by Noelle k.

    great poem.

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