by xAmx Feb 26, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
I thought I lost my true love |
Amazing once agian. I think this is one of your stronger pieces. |
thanks so much this is pretty good... gave you a five/five... keep up the good work |
a life time wrapped up in one awsome poem! good job, to feel happiness you must feel pain you cant have one with out the other excellent poem! great flow and structure |
by Frankie
You kinda drifted in the middle and came back to the point at the end, good. |
by katie!
Wow thats really good, emotional cool, keep it up xx |