I wrote this poem when all the words just came into my head.

great great write!!!!

xoxox
Aubs *check mine out*

Wow thats really good, emotional cool, keep it up xx

You kinda drifted in the middle and came back to the point at the end, good.

a life time wrapped up in one awsome poem! good job, to feel happiness you must feel pain you cant have one with out the other excellent poem! great flow and structure
>>5/5<<
*bec* xXx

thanks so much this is pretty good... gave you a five/five... keep up the good work
thanks
amanda

Amazing once agian. I think this is one of your stronger pieces.