Wow, I really liked reading it, it flowed really smoothly and there werent lots of pointless lines keep it up your a really good writer

i really like this and can relate but your so much better at putting it into words nice work 5/5!
xxxChristinaxxx

incredibly sad, very powerful, i liked it. 5/5
*~*Soldier Lover*~*

could you please check out 'Lost' or 'Addicted' please? thanks

wow, that was a good poem! i liked the format that you used, very good writing, i loved it!
thanks for your comments i appreciate them ;)
take care xxx

i really enjoyed this poem great work... you are very talented... sometimes i think just like this poem... dont you wish one day you would wake up and all the pain woulld just dissapear... anyhow great work hun..xox Sherrie

awsome poem, very well written!! I totally relate, keep writing!!! Thanks for your comment, read more of my poems if you would....I will be back and read more of your poem and add you to my favorites!!!

this is really good...I liked it alot. In a post i said i'd read your poems...I would read more but I've already commented on a lot of them! This is one of the only ones I haven't read. I don't want you to think I'm ignoring you! haha...You have some Talent. Keep it up!
Love Always,
Angel

I love this it was so heartfelt and flowed realy smoothly greatjob

great poem, very deep..dont let anyone put you down...keep up your great work!! :) take care.

Ur poems are very good! Thanx for reading mine!

Amazing writing, Verry powerfull i liked it ! :D Keep it up, hope to be reading more

Tigger Thx for the comment on my poem :D

I liked the poem itself. The only critism I can offer is to try to set a rhyme scheme and then things will flow better. Nice job though.

like it. its wonderful

this is a really good poem i esp liked the bit

I try to smile, to be so happy
Yet deep inside my soul is dying

can really relate to it keep it up!!

lilykit
feel free 2 check out mine x

hey, I loved your poem. I know how you feel, and I hope you get happier soon. You're a wonderful writer, and I hope you write more.

Come read my poems sometime!

-Michelle

Wow! This is an amazing poem and shows the full amount of emotion. All my love Emma xxx 5/5

Incredible Poem.
I Enjoyed Reading it,
I Hope This Isn't True Though.
Thanks For Sharing.

Failed

Wow, this poem is great! I can relate to a lot of it. Keep it up hun!

Love,
Tiff

wow, that was an awesome poem gurl. lots of emotion. just the way i like it! exelent work! keep it up!

vedali

I honestly like this one..
The emotions are real..
Keep on writing.
;)