wow, sad poem, but a rather good 1, I dont have any advice for this 1 :( but thanks for the comment I revised the poem check it out and tell me what you think

excellent write!!! 5/5!!! plz vote and comment on my work!!! thanks!!
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awww thats sad but such a great poem, ur really talented, keep up the great work