Doubt, Despair and Hate

kick ass stuff...im bad at this commenting thing...i really liked this poem...and the depression thing isnt to hard to write about...5/5

Had I not just read your comment I was about to say that this is everything opposite to what I think you believe in and most certainly write about.
For me this was a very absorbing poem, it was so enigmatic provoking alot of thought within me.

Kind regards
Your friend
Hayley

wow! amazing write! i like the style and even though its short it is still very meaningful and yet powerful....i love it!

I should have explained this poem it is the opposite of what I usually write about,which is faith, hope, and charity. these virtues are necessary for any healthy spirit. I wrote this poem as a challenge to write a poem that was the opposite of my style. I can't say I have never felt this way, but by the grace of God I do not feel that way now. I am glad you did not like it May God bless you It Itty and thanks for the comment.

Hey Michael, been a while. Not sure what to think of this poem...I am praying for you, you just have to trust God to put those people in your lives.