~ excellent write, jacklyn. expressive and neatly written
~ take care, 5! always believe in love ~amit

i love it! amazing poem!

The end of this poem made me just want to cry. I have this clear image of the guy coming in the hospital room and whispering in your ear. SWEET! Excellent:)

One of the best love poes ive readon this site.Great job! (That was more than a 5).

This is excellent-so very well written.It tells a story, it is a love poem a friendship piece, and so much more.Excellent structure(could use a couple touch ups) but the emotion you convey is so real and powerful.The repeating lines of 'Everything is going to be alright' is repeated just enough to give the piece a smoother flow and again, more emotional impact and amidst the despair, that line especially at the end leaves things with a glimmer of hope.Great piece all the way around.

Jackie it is I Cesar, just thought i'd stop by and return the love. You're awsome.
xocaesarox