Comments : Make Pretend

  • 19 years ago

    by Toni

    Fantastic poem and I really agree with what you're saying, I hate people that are fake and only following 'trends'. Brilliant poem, so so well written too! Always here!

    Toni xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by jescelle

    holy shyt! that was awsome ans sooo soo true! great job girly.....u know......u are super talented, i think this is oe of my favs yet! i love you!
    jescelle

  • 19 years ago

    by confusion

    wow... that was amazin hun, *jaw returns 2 closed position* so true an just brilliantly put. loved the lines

    They have no personality for they are all the same,
    They have nothing to loose and everything to gain,

    and

    She won’t understand it but then again she won’t have to,
    She’ll just reform again and find something to tap into,

    perfectly put!! luey -x-x-x-xx-