that was such a good poem! Really well written! I'm really sorry that this is true, and I hope everything is alright. Please check out some of my stuff if ya have time. Thanks. (",)

~Krissy

Awesome work. It's a 5. Sorry that it's all true tho. Just hold your head up high and never give up.

awwww gurl ur poem made mi cry exspecially since i noe how it feelz without a fathern ur rite i luv uz r juss a bunch of liez coz tha onez u luv tha most r tha onez that hurt u tha most well i wish i cud truly hlp u but i cant so all i have left 2 say iz try 2 keep ur head up n stay strong coz if u lost everything ull have nuthin more 2 lose n remember after a storm cumz a rainbow well i wish u tha best of luck n if u eva want 2 talk u noe where im @ bye gurl

this poem was so sad, but lovely great job.

Hey girl just wanted to let u know u need to b strong n its sad to hear about his but im pretty sure ur dad deep in his hearts loves ya...

*hugs*

thank you all.... this all really means a lot to me... thank you again and i'll be sure to vote/comment on all of your poems... i'll get on it... :) love ya guys!

I must agree with everyone above, this poem is excellent. I like the wording and the the imagery used throughout. The structure really helps to develop the meaning. Well done. I can feel the pain expressed in this poem, but I am sure you will be strong enough to keep going. Excellent job. Nicely written. Keep it up!

Beautiful poem. made me teary. loved it. i hope you know that God works in mysterious ways and taht he still loves you, even if you can't feel it. it's all for his glory, i promise. keep smiling, keep hoping, and keep praying. if you ever need someone to vent to, im here. <3