Heyyy awesome poem!! i really like it!! keep up the awesome job!!!

xX-Katherine-Xx

Lotsa emotions in this. Very go0d :D

Well done,
;;-- Kalah

love it....sad...but hey so are all my mine accept this is better, i give it a 5 keep it up!
xxxChristinaxxx

I'm Glad To See That People With Rhyming Poems Still Exist...Your Flow Of Rythm Is Natural..Up Beat And Well Worded "My heart beat is slowing down
and the cuts still blead
I lay upon my pillows
and begin to weep"......My Favorite Part 5/5 -Nikk
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