Weakness Prevails

by ßeAuTiFuLlY~bRoKeи   Feb 27, 2005


As she cries
She holds a knife
All she can think of
Is her sad lonely life
Not the same life
She fakes everyday
But the one full of feelings
That won't go away
Don't make her talk
Your making this real
She wants to be numb
Yet...still wants to feel
Now as she sits here
The words spill out
Full of self hatred
Tears and doubt
If just for one minute
You could look through her eyes
Feel all the pain
And hear all the lies
Lonely, self conscious
But can't even cry
Weak and distraught
Wanting to die
Can't get past
These thoughts in her head
Outside she fakes it
Though inside she's dead
Some try to wake her
And some watch her sleep
She no longer sees hope
She's in way to deep
Darkness embraces her
As she reaches for light
Struggling for freedom
With all of her might
But weakness prevails
The light fades away
Pain leaves her numb
She's falling further each day
The life she once had
Left her behind
And all the searching
Has left her blind

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  • 19 years ago

    by Torn

    Wow..if u could only see my face right now. My eyes are actually welling up with tears and my jaw literally dropped. The way you write about suicide is the way i see it too...i just see so much of myself in these, yet i could never right how i felt like you just did.

    I am so sorry u feel like this and i wish it were as easy as to say 'i'll be here for you' to take your pain away..but i dont think that's enough.
    Keep in mind anyway that i will be here and that id love to hear from u sometime.
    Chin up huni xoxoxox

  • 19 years ago

    by lee

    that was awesome, i really lk all of the poems you wrote. ur really good at writing, so keep it up!

  • 19 years ago

    by GoodMorning

    excuse me while i throw all of my poems out....that was amazing, mine are a heap of trash compared to that lol........it was sad, but an amazing poem, i like all of your work.....keep it up =).......and keep your head up.......laterzzz hun 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Tainted Butterfly

    This had a great flow to it. Sooo sad. I loved it though.

  • 19 years ago

    by yinyang22334455

    sweetie! this is wonderful, but i hope ur not cutting yourself1 pleez read my poem "dont turn to the knife"

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