I really liked this. I especially admired the lines,
"I slide my broken body down my wall
And scream your name so hard and loud
"ARE YOU SATISFIED WITH WHAT YOU'VE DONE TO ME
ARE YOU PROUD?!"
Yes...I can definetly relate.
you described the betrayl and abandonment so well throughout the piece, it displays the emotional depth that has taken place to have created such an impact on you. And the symbol of a glass house caving in on you was perfect. If I'm not mistaken, it's meant to symbolize a fragile entrapment ready to breakdown and destroy the beholder along with it...(?)
if so, it fits the piece perfectly. Well done love

I love this piece...my fave by you so far! It read easily and conveyed an abundance of emotions! Superbly written~Holly