wow...i'm usually into the rhyming ones most but that was really good i like it! >5/5< |
by Rashelle
I liked this alot.Its seems like alot of your poems are about sucide if you ever need anybody to talk too you can send me a message at my proifle thingy.Anyway back to the poem.I realy liked it usaly i like ones that rhym but surprisingly i realy liked this! |
very good. keep up the good work |
by creasy
i thought this was really good!! love it!! keep it up!! :) |
by katie!
greaT keep it up talk to me if you want i self harm etc to |
wow.....this is almost like a suicide letter......good tho |
by Valerie
Wow....that's deep. I hope you don't feel that way. My life consists of everyday stupid high school stuff. Nothing as torrent as that. Anyways good poem. 5/5 |
by Brookeღ
Very good I really liked it. I read so many of these sad poems I hope that u really don't feel like that! Keep writing u r really good! |
by Nobia
its nice...likd it :):) tcz~ |
i love it ur really u....5/5 i no how u feel if u need to talk IM me (iluvsoccer510) or email me at iluvsoccer510@yahoo.com |
by Emma
This is a really strong subject! Written really well. Great job! 5/5. Love Emma xxx |
Great poem Hun. Keep it up. |
by *Sherrie*
I really like this... it has this egdy type style...I kept wanting more... |
by shannon
i loved it! i gave it a five out of five! |
by Emilia
great poem.. very good.. 5 stars for this one =) Please read my poem "The Final Cut For Marc" And "My Dad: Dead And gone.. Thanks a lot.. Take Care |
A sadness like this is better expressed through your words honey. Keep going. Love Rach xx |
by ღShannaღ
Wow,I like it. |
by Kalika
Great job....I really liked it....it was very sad, but so well done.... |
by Just Lucy
wow, a truely touching poem, brilliantly written, you have a real good talent |
by shannon
i really liked this poem..alot..very very good job. 5/5 |