Comments : The world in which we live

  • 19 years ago

    by ßeAuTiFuLlY~bRoKeи

    wow...i'm usually into the rhyming ones most but that was really good i like it! >5/5<
    xxxChristinaxxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Rashelle

    I liked this alot.Its seems like alot of your poems are about sucide if you ever need anybody to talk too you can send me a message at my proifle thingy.Anyway back to the poem.I realy liked it usaly i like ones that rhym but surprisingly i realy liked this!
    good job

  • 19 years ago

    by xxangelchicxx2000

    very good. keep up the good work

  • 19 years ago

    by creasy

    i thought this was really good!! love it!! keep it up!! :)

  • 19 years ago

    by katie!

    greaT keep it up talk to me if you want i self harm etc to

  • 19 years ago

    by *~*Soldier Lover*~*

    wow.....this is almost like a suicide letter......good tho
    *~*Soldier Lover*~*

  • 19 years ago

    by Valerie

    Wow....that's deep. I hope you don't feel that way. My life consists of everyday stupid high school stuff. Nothing as torrent as that. Anyways good poem. 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    Very good I really liked it. I read so many of these sad poems I hope that u really don't feel like that! Keep writing u r really good!

  • 19 years ago

    by Nobia

    its nice...likd it :):) tcz~

  • 19 years ago

    by SavannahSurrender

    i love it ur really u....5/5 i no how u feel if u need to talk IM me (iluvsoccer510) or email me at iluvsoccer510@yahoo.com
    **much love**

    ~ShAtTeReD*HeArT~

  • 19 years ago

    by Emma

    This is a really strong subject! Written really well. Great job! 5/5. Love Emma xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by t i f f a n y ♥

    Great poem Hun. Keep it up.

    Love,
    Tiff

  • 19 years ago

    by *Sherrie*

    I really like this... it has this egdy type style...I kept wanting more...

    Xox Sherrie

  • 19 years ago

    by shannon

    i loved it! i gave it a five out of five!

  • 19 years ago

    by Emilia

    great poem.. very good.. 5 stars for this one =) Please read my poem "The Final Cut For Marc" And "My Dad: Dead And gone.. Thanks a lot.. Take Care

  • 19 years ago

    by Rachel E F Allen

    A sadness like this is better expressed through your words honey. Keep going. Love Rach xx

  • 19 years ago

    by ღShannaღ

    Wow,I like it.
    You have a talent,keep it up.
    </3Shanna
    Ryn-Sadly enough,yes its about me.Ive had a hard 14 years...

  • 19 years ago

    by Kalika

    Great job....I really liked it....it was very sad, but so well done....

    Kalika

  • 19 years ago

    by Just Lucy

    wow, a truely touching poem, brilliantly written, you have a real good talent
    thank u for the great reading!!!5/5
    *~#LuCy#~*

  • 19 years ago

    by shannon

    i really liked this poem..alot..very very good job. 5/5