Building Blocks of Me

it won't let me vote it a five since i already voted, but please know i think it's a five and beyond x x x x

okay looking deeper into the first verse, which was what confused me, i now understand, but once sentence i think you worded wrong was :
filled with torns from the seams.
was it meant to be 'filled with tears from the seems?'
i'll re-vote if it'll let me a five now i understand it, lol i guess that's a huge complement of how clever a writer you are that it took me so long to understand what i now see is a beautiful first verse, take care x x x x

i see where you're gong with this but some of the wording doesn't quite make sense, though i do love the flow of it, and the meaning in it. x

i like it, you ended it very well creative idea and good use of words! your such a sweetheart! PLP

~lil slam~

Wow...I've only read 2 of your poems but I am soooo adding you to my friends list. They're awesome.