aww...great write...i love the rain too...mayeb when we are together, we can go dancing in the rain together =) we should..i love you so much <33 you're so amazing xxxx

-Mortalidaga
xxTakeCarexx

I like the rain aswell, I love the way you use objects or things to describe your emotions and feelings, keep it up xxx

Hey this Is An Awsome poem! i love the ryming it flows good!
*Kat*

I love the way you began it. It was nicely done. This poem is amazing.

Another thing you are good at, you manage to make the poems move forward, you kind of put an act into it......I really liked this one it was amazingly breathtaking, and I also really liked the rymes.....