She Had Everything

by Noelle   Feb 27, 2005


She had everything
She had it all
She had bling bling
When ever she wanted something all she had to do was call
She had a great life

But one day she ruined it
She had a feeling in her gut
That it was wrong to cut
But still
She picked up a knife
And started to kill
She started to kill herself
Slowly and slowly- too slowly she started to use the pill

She was still alive
But not as we know it
She hid behind that smile plastered on her face
Her heart told her to end it all
But her face said she was always happy
And why wouldn't she be?
After all, she DID have it all

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  • 19 years ago

    by katie!

    That is a really intelligent poem......Really well ended......So powerful and great to read well done

  • 19 years ago

    by Sinister Soire

    another strong poem, this has alot of meaning. though some of your lines are too long or short and dont quite fit., its powerful all the same. keep it up. good job

  • 19 years ago

    by ?

    Clever poem, I particularly liked the ending, makes it have a deeper message, keep it up xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by ßeAuTiFuLlY~bRoKeи

    thats really good and really gets me thinking....nice work
    xxxChristinaxxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Ironic Allure

    Very different poem. I like the emphasis on the word 'Did' really gets the reader thinking. Very intruiging. Well done.
    Take care of yourself.
    ALl my love,
    Laura.

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