Very different poem. I like the emphasis on the word 'Did' really gets the reader thinking. Very intruiging. Well done.
Take care of yourself.
ALl my love,
Laura.

thats really good and really gets me thinking....nice work
xxxChristinaxxx

Clever poem, I particularly liked the ending, makes it have a deeper message, keep it up xxx

another strong poem, this has alot of meaning. though some of your lines are too long or short and dont quite fit., its powerful all the same. keep it up. good job

That is a really intelligent poem......Really well ended......So powerful and great to read well done