by Donna Feb 27, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
I cut my wrists |
by Saving Grace
I like this poem..its easy to relate to..it would be better if it did rhyme, but apart from that you have done an awesome job. Keep it up. |
by Esther
nice poem! might want to work on one or two ryme though but i think it would still be fine if you didn't! |
by foreverhappy
I think this is a great poem too. I don't usually like poems that don't rhyme but i really did like this one. I understand this all to well. Its such a good poem though. Keep it up. |
Deep poem .. well done yeah. |