Deep poem .. well done yeah.

Hope u r okays <3

^^Kalah.

I think this is a great poem too. I don't usually like poems that don't rhyme but i really did like this one. I understand this all to well. Its such a good poem though. Keep it up.

nice poem! might want to work on one or two ryme though but i think it would still be fine if you didn't!

I like this poem..its easy to relate to..it would be better if it did rhyme, but apart from that you have done an awesome job. Keep it up.

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