aw.i hope u feel better. this is really gud i kno exactly how u feel. can u comment on sum of my stuff if u have the time

This was a good poem, it seemed to lack structure to it. I don't know maybe it is just me and being a stickler for strcture but it seemed to lack it. I liked the poem and i didn't like the message it presented but i would rather hear this one then an explicit one...never was one for those..i actually rolled my eyes at that, i am just not really into explicit writings...just who i am.

Well anyways this was a good poem and i think you should stick with it.

P.S. thank you for both your comments on my poem and i appreciate it, sorry it took me so long to comment back to one of your poems but that poem got a great outburst of comments.