by My Obsεssion Feb 27, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Carve your likeness in my leg |
This is a great poem. The only thing I don't like is that it isn't from your point of view. I mean, I'm glad you're not a cutter, but poems like this just ruin it for me a bit. But still though, great job! |
really good |
from a former cutters (occasionally steps back) opinion, I do believe you captured emotions well. You're not well known around here but I believe your poems are good, great usuage of words, strong emotions, good structure! thanks for adding me to your faves, keep up writing like this and the comments and you'll be in mine sure, your works wonderful Erin! much love to ya -5 |
by Amit
~ u've written it very well |
by Alexis
this poem is so gud. even if ur not a cutter u wrote it so amazing. can u rate some of my stuff id appreciate it |