I Need You Now

by Danielle   Feb 28, 2005


My friend I need you now
Please take me by the hand
Stand by me in my hour of need.
Take time to understand.

Take my hand, dear friend,
And lead me from this place,
Chase away my doubts and fears,
Wipe the tears from my face.

Friend I cannot stand alone.
I need your hand to hold,
The warmth of your gentle touch.
In my world that's grown so cold.

Please be a friend to me, and hold me day by day. Because with your loving hand in mine. I know we'll find the way.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Natalie84

    I think that you should separate the last 2 lines and make it three so it looks better and it would also be a little easier to read.
    Anyway it was an awesome poem. I know that it is hard to write something, anything, while it's purpose is to ask for help. You did a very good job. Excellent poem!! 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by jenn

    Took the words right out of my mouth. Great write. I love it. Keep it up. I would love to read more from ya. Check out some of mine if u get the change. Great write.

    *JEnn*

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