Took the words right out of my mouth. Great write. I love it. Keep it up. I would love to read more from ya. Check out some of mine if u get the change. Great write.

*JEnn*

I think that you should separate the last 2 lines and make it three so it looks better and it would also be a little easier to read.
Anyway it was an awesome poem. I know that it is hard to write something, anything, while it's purpose is to ask for help. You did a very good job. Excellent poem!! 5/5