thanx for checking out my poem..

im sorry it had to be that way... it was wrong for him to play you the way he did, and for tat i am truly sorry because no one shouls have to suffer that pain and it trubles me so that u have already vared such a heavy heart for u are so young and already know what the world is like. I am sorry my deer child for u have lost ur innocents so.

Great poem. i enjoyed it. keep up the great work.
Emma 5/5

Very good poem. You are a great poet. This poem has a great pace to it.5/5