Shadow I Was

by Lauren Waszkiewicz   Feb 28, 2005


Living in a shadow, forever watching you.
I am in love, and it kills me how you have no clue.
Now I'm coming clean, of my deepest thoughts .
If u don't feel the same way all of this was for naught.
I've liked you for the longest time, and I have mentioned nothing.
so now these wonderful words are what I am now admitting.
my friends know all about you and how I really feel,
if you don't feel the same, I don't know if I can heal.

ok people will anyone please rate and comment please?

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  • 18 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Very nice poem.5/5 Don't change a thing;)

  • 19 years ago

    by FlowerThatDied

    Thats reli nice becos its very relatable and it leaves u understanding how u must hav felt - if u get the chnce read a few of mine

  • 19 years ago

    by Taylor

    great poem! i love it! really sad. . . but so easy to relate to! keep it up!

    Love, Taylor

  • 19 years ago

    by *Amber Faith.* ©

    That was good.. Thanks for comin' and lookin' at my poems.. Keep ya head up high!