by Rashelle Feb 28, 2005
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
What you see |
by Christa
I agree with Gandalf about how your poem flows, it's kind of choppy, but the message is great. I love that you have pride in who you are, even within all your imperfections. I also really liked the last couple lines, the ending of a poem determines how the poem is received. Your ending was beautiful. Keep up the good work!! :) |
by Kayla
Lol...very cute poem and omg i love mac and cheese too...lol i wrote a poem about it:) anyway great poem...it is wonderful that you know who you are!!! luv yas mwah |
by James
Beautiful poem :) |
by TrUtH hUrTs
heyy i love the ending |
this was another great poem, you're a good writer....I like how you made this poem your own, you can really see you put yourself into it....take care girl... |