i really liked this poem!! i thought it was great!! keep it up!! keep ya head up as well!! take care!! :)

i like dz poem i hope u dont really feel like dz but if u do just noe u have to talk 2 ive gon through alot in life n wouldnt miind helpin othaz much luv

Hey hey! I love this 1!

i love the rhyme scheme and the use of words..and i can see wot ur gettin at...i too get engulfed in my 'inner darkness' more often than not...

Hey this poem is reallyyy good i really like it! awesome job! i gave it a 5

xX-Katherine-Xx

I love all of ur poems u have talent.

I want to be happy
Like I was before

This spoke to me. I know exactly how you feel. I want to be happy too. Great job hun. Keep it up!

Love,
Tiff

I really liked how the rhythm got to be at the end. I hope you're all right! Keep it up.

you wanna know what i think i think your good... i think i could have wrote this myself... this is really deep...Sherrie

wow, that was a great poem, u really have talent great job

~ nice write nida. u write a lot of sad stuff. sadness ---> not good
~ take care, 5! always believe in love ~amit

Is snow fast?

again, inconsistent rhyming.. a style too much of teen angst for me. Again, more vividness and try using imagery every now and then.

Wow, I loved that, well done
5! xxx

Excellent job, I loved it. Keep up the great work.

Well,
Another good one.
What else can i say.
;)