This poem is excellent! Keep writing you're amazing at it.

Wow, thats really good, you have talent and I enjoyed reading this poem
Keep up the good work
love katie xx

creatively written! i would never be able to write about shoes lol! thank you for the comment! -5

God bless
Love Heather.

this is odd but awesome

byes adn laters,
brandy

wow.. i really like this poem.... u've got real talent... it expresses how u feel without u really saying it... awesome.. good job

Interesting well written and nice subject unusual