Run

to be honest, as i read the poem, i was lyk its short and i dunno wat ur running away from and why, but the last line jus closed it up 4 me, and it changed the meaning of ur piece for me..
keep it upz
nouna

hey loved the poem.. we all run from things sometimes.. keep it up.

Expand more! Tell me why you want to run. Put more emotion into this! Pour your heart out..I know you have it in you.

very insightful poem. makes me remember how I used to feel when I was your age. I've really been enjoying your poems...

Great poem, really like the flow but the conculsion, maybe it could of been more to it, good overall though