Wants or needs

by Shy   Feb 28, 2005


Wants
Needs
the line is blurred
where does one end
and the other begin
do they intersect
where a want evolves into a need
does that desire
become so overwhelming
that you can't handle it
the truth is... there is no clear line
no real separation
no distinction
only confusion

    report violation
0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 19 years ago

    by otto

    good poems liked the conculsion, lines 6-9, I just think could be touched for the flow to be better, not that it's bad it's good

  • 19 years ago

    by ღ Christina ღ

    Excellent poem! 5 I can really relate to this poem! <3 5

  • 19 years ago

    by TrUtH hUrTs

    yups short n sweet...very thoughtful too..good work

  • 19 years ago

    by NoPatience

    great poem keep up the good work

  • 19 years ago

    by N J Thornton

    This is a very deep and throught provoking poem. I agree there are times when you're dealing with matters of the heart that wants can become somewhat confused with needs and vice versa. This is a very original write, it's short and to the point. You did a very good job here, keep up the good work.

Read All Comments (12)

More Poems By Shy