Take Me Away

Well, Heather dear. I just read your very own comment and it completely cracked me up! That whole "I wouldn't parade it around on here for immaturity"...hilarious! I think this is a very strong piece! Keep it up~Holly

There are times when we all feel broken down, as if there is little point and the only thing capable of removing the loss is pain. It is important to vent sometimes, just remember to think of all the times you don't need to vent: all the good times. Talk to you later, and nice poem - Chris

I'm not going to kill myself just so everyone knows, my goodness, if I was I wouldnt parade it around on here for immaturity, reread the last stanza, it's just a symbolization as in the gun is the only way it can disappear, I will always hold the pain forever. Much love to you all for the kind comments though.

God bless~Heather.

For someone who doesnt like suicide poems you done a great job with this one!
Good job...Keep it up!
Mwa!!!

That's sad...yet so awesome. Don't hurt yourself you don't deserve all that and don't kill yourself your too talented to die!
Please don't give up,
Sammi