Beatiful :)

I'm sure he's very honoured you've written this for him.

Take care of yourself bumweed.
All my love and fair wings,
Nut Loaf.

lush poem, flows really wel, rely liked the lines

It’s pumping out blood
Whilst I’m sprawled on the floor
Don’t try to repair it
It’ll only bleed more

take care always :)
lu -x-x-x-x-x-x-x-

Oh boobs I spelt fairy wrong. My god, you'd think I'd learn!! What a spoon I am.. Apologies for messing your comment page up too :T

Oh no, and beautiful too! Hehe, this is just gettinf ridopolous!

Getting*

..I wish I was doing this on purpose :(

Thanku everybody! x

OMG I LOVE IT!!! I am honoured as Ironic Allure had guessed, WOW, i will stay by you hun and love you forever, i wont give up on you now :D i love you and i love this poem!!!! it really made me smile :D its a shame 5 is the highest i can vote for it!!!! i would go higher if i could XXXXXXXXXXX i love you Toni :D xxxxx Well Done :D

:-) xx

aww sweatheart........im sure he is one lucky guy to have such a loving and talented gurl like you! great write!always here.....
jescelle

thanku! x

das gorgeous darlin, its a fabby dabby poem as always (mainly coz thats how u write em...... lol) i loved it,
take care always,
big hugs,
ellie
xoxoxox

thanks el! x

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!! Toni, I LOVE this poem! i mean....omg! I love it! lol! That was soo good! I'm surprised half the entire site didn't comment on it! You deserve every comment of everyone because it was so good. There isn't a bad thing to say about it! It was.....omfg! lol......undescribable....that's it. Great, GREAT! job!! You're a wonderful author and you must be, obviously, very thankful for having Oliver as your boyfriend. I wish you both the best wishes ever and I hope you two both have your happy ending!!

~Sierra

Thanku hunni x

Thank you sooooooooooooo much for your comment!! I LOVED IT!! lol! Thanks!

~Sierra

:-) xxx

wow gurl i really enjoyed readin ur poem keep up tha gud work!!!!

Thanku all! xx