that was excellent!!
great great job!!

xoxox
Aubs

that was a great read, I really enjoyed it, I didnt realise it was so long well done!

Hey this was a great poem.. I really liked the form... I never read a poem quite like this one.. Very good.. it's direct.. I really liked it.. Keep them coming and Take Care
Angel

wow... i mean, wow... that was amazing. so very discriptive and comparative and beautiful. i love this poem. it's sweet, so bitter though. i love your style. amazing girl. 5/5