by ~DyingBlackRose~ Feb 28, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
rekindled love
I met you over the phone |
by N J Thornton
Don't get me wrong poems don't have to rhyme at all, but they should flow in a poetic way at least. This just reads as a paragraph. I respect your attempts and i like what you are saying, i just think you could have formatted it better. But that's up to you. |