great poem!!

Vic, this is spicefull beautiful. I love the drama in this poem. Keep it up Hun!!!

WoW! Great writting! Really amazing job here! Lots of emotion and talent in this poem! Excellent,excellent job!!!:o)
Keep it up my friend!!
Shannon

full of emotion and wonderfully written.. luv ur style this line i really liked!! "Tears are running swiftly down her face
Maybe soon she will feel the angel’s warm embrace
The voices sing in triumph as another human they have fooled
Now the girl is slipping away as her life seemed to be doomed"
5/5

thx for ur comments! =D

Wow! Great poem! The rhymes worked well together, and the poem flowed really well. Thanks for the comment on my new poem!
Take care,
Rachelxx