~ nice one, andream
~ take care, 5! always believe in love ~amit ^_^

The layout is unque, I love the words you used, my fav. lines were..
'Relief is only made after several drops or cuts.
Preventing is not an option although it is a must.'
Keep it up xxx

Andrean, of all of your poems, this one is my favorite! I can feel the emotion in every singel word.

Take care, Tom

finally a new one! lol and a good one at that! i love it Andrea!

God bless
love Heather.

OMG that is so - sad and yet so beautifully written. its amzing well done!!!

Jemma

beautiful!!! amazingly written and so deep and expressfull. beautiful write!
-xXx-

unique, i really liked this poem and it is unique the way you are. I enjoy reading your poetry, it is a good break from writing them. I have so many unfinished ones...hehe. Well i must say...for a young girl such as yourself you hold a lot of resentment towards something or someone, they make wonderful poems but cause a lot of anguish.

Five/Five

P.S. Thanks for commenting on my poems, each one i get from anyone is very much appreciated...i always return the favor.

An interesting format. although a 4 line set up, the 4th line seperation puts focus on your tears.

I like dark/sad poems less every day and yet I am compelled to read yours and even more strangely I appear to enjoy each poem more than the last.

You're certainly doing something right!!

I look forward to the next.

Bert

Dark and full of emotion.. Very nice.. Keep it up can't wait to read your next write.. 5/5

*> : PainOfOne

Sad and full of emotion but beautiful poem. Take care, hugs, lol, *Ann*

yup exactly what ann said "sad and full of emotion" i love it great poem keep writing i cant wait to see more!
xxxChristinaxxx

hey! this is a great poem! i love it so much! i'm glad that you wrote this it's so beautiful! so compelling and so relateable! keep it up!

Love, Taylor

that was incredable... there isnt a part that i can point out as my favorate...
i loved it! amazing job... 5/5

wow, you're an unbelievable writer, just wow, your descriptions are so beautiful, i love the way your expressed your tears, each of them being so different, wow, im just so speechless. you're such an inspiration! great work :) xxx

Way to go Andrea! I luved it! You're so good at writing, hehe! (",)

*hugs*

~Krissy

This was so wonderful and full of emotion.. I loved it! :-) Keep it up and take care! God bless you! <3

hey this truly is a great poem. By FAR your best poem to date.

i hear u

oh dear Andrea, thank you for the kind comment but all of those things didn't happen to ME, you must've misunderstood the poem Heather's Hotline, I'm so very sorry hun but thank you for the adorable hugs...*hugs back* i love ya!

-Heather