wow! i love it, amazing work!

wow really really good!! i absolutely love it. beautifully written. keep up the great work!
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Good poem, one line about the invisible glue seemed abit out of place here for some reason. i am not sure why it just didn't seem to fit in the theme of the poem. I think it was wonderfully writen for sure though.

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awesome hunny and thanks for puttin' mah name on your profile :)! You're amazing keep it up, i don't wanna stop reading!