its amazing =)

hey, really nice poem! i hope this 'rain' will stop, and all the other things u described very well! 5/5!
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WOW!!! that was awesome....wow lol good job

the only thing I'd change is put a that in "So I can be whole," so it read "So that I can be whole," it might flow a little better! Great poem...not going to argue with the rest 5/5!

i like this poem very much 5/5 and i would like to tell you i love all your poems keep it up....xoxox BJ

5/5 great stuff keep up da good work :)

wow that was really good! awesome job, 5/5